What Another Romney Run Means
LATimes, 16 January 2015
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With the arrival of the new year, Doyle McManus found himself both looking back in review and looking forward to the future. In his most recent article, he informs and takes a deeper look into the bubbling pot that is the 2016 presidential election and a rather outstanding candidate. Mitt Romney's shortcoming in the 2012 election branded him a failure in the eyes of the republican party. McManus proposes his recurrence in the 2016 election and explores many different opinions regarding Romney's use of the "second chance." It is here that the articles drifts off into a series of well-said comments, each applying a trait of either ambition or insanity or expressing their ambivalence towards Romney's actions. While the Nation Republican Committee promises a more effective election process, the "drama" surrounding the upcoming election indicates otherwise.
McManus' column capitalizes on several rhetorical strategies to achieve his purpose in an interesting, appealing way to further encapsulate the readers. They undeniably impact both the direction and effect of his argument. His central contention regards Romney's likely recurrence in the 2016 election and the drama it has recently stirred up. To introduce the piece, McManus immediately establishes credibility by recognizing the small, but impacting flaw in his argument: the 2016 presidential candidates are not set in stone yet. This note paired with his use of opinions from well-known sources validate his reliability by demonstrating dedication to the argument at hand. However, while citing and self-awareness seems to be his strong suit, it becomes evident that McManus' metaphorical language really sets him apart from other pundits. From the second line to the end of the article, figurative language appeals to the argument in a way not categorized by the standard rhetorical appeals. It provides simplified reiterations of dense material and creates a more aesthetically-pleasing image of McManus' argument. The "startling gun" and the "[startled] birds" visualizes the convoluted mess of dramatic politics into a language common to the population. As for McManus's framework, there is no apparent structure to the article. It does not follow the standards of any essay or analysis but instead the simple, sometimes digressive train of thought. The way the piece transitions seems more like a child's rambling about some insignificant problem rather than a scholarly assessment of politics (however, this does not detract from his central argument or its efficiency).
Figurative language can add a lot to a piece, as you noted. It can take difficult concepts and "dumb them down" for the audience, without sacrificing the writing. I'm actually surprised you said you hadn't seen it in other pundits' writing. You might want to check out Dana Milbank next month; he uses a fair amount of humor, and he achieves that through figurative language and turns of phrasing like you noted here. If you like it, he's a pretty good read.
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ReplyDeleteRomney's return to the election stand will definitely be a surprise to many if it happens (which it looks like it will). I wonder how his previous shortcoming will play into his campaigning and popularity among his earlier supporters and where exactly he will turn for help.
I commented on Mary Beth's blog, Joe's blog, and Julia's blog.
DeleteI personally think that it would be foolish for the RNC to nominate Romney again. He was unable to pull off a victory in an election where a major portion of the Republican Party turned out in opposition to President Obama. I don't think that it is worth it for Romney to spend large amounts on his campaign when his likelihood of even securing the Republican nomination is small. Once again, my personal opinion is that Romney's best bet for his political career and for the GOP in 2016 is to try to be a running mate on a tea partier to unite the tea party and the establishment.
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